Peer Review (3)-Narrative Argument Essay

The peer review helped a bit better on this essay. However, since the topic was a narrative argument, the essay was a bit easier to write. This time instead of using information and research, it was more personal and it was arguing a life lesson. Also, to write the whole overall argument, you need to relive the experience, which was pretty shitty. It wasn't an easy thing to talk about, however, it was the only good topic in which I could think of. It combined the skill of writing a story and teaching something that applies to a certain audience. My topic was about me coming out 2 years ago; where it applies my conversation with my mother and the choice of being who I want to be. Now, this paper easily has its argument with the scene between me and my mother arguing. Yet, it needed a lot of background information, and dialogue in order to make a good narrative argument. I did obtain a good amount of feedback, in where I didn't need to correct too much but too little information.